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I'M Just Another Girl.

I'm just another girl. My situation doesn't matter. The fact is, at one point or another, everyone gets let down, everyone has disappointments, everyone hurts. We're all human. We're allowed to feel these emotions without feeling guilt or greed. We'll all have good days & bad days; days where you wish you'd never gotten out of bed. Days when you think you cannot carry on any longer. It's on these days you need to search deep down, and keep it together when you'd rather fall apart. Muster up every ounce of dignity & courage you have, and put a fake smile upon that gloomy face of yours. After a while you will feel Impowered Courageous Strong Confident. It is this that you will take away from this experience. You'll always remember the pain & the disappointment, but that will only puse you harder to become a much stronger person.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2010 3:11:00 PM
A strong will speaking here Rachel, nice one >> James
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:33:00 PM
Very insightful and forceful poetry. Motivates the reader to become "impowered." You bring a fresh and welcome voice to Poetry Soup, Rachel. Don't let Stephania, Sylvia or whatever Ms. Esther is calling herself now stop you from sharing your fine work with us. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:55:00 AM
yep we get strong or get out.
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Date: 4/1/2010 4:42:00 AM
Very true Rachel and u have written it so well.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today and keep your chin up cause "its all good" .. happy Easter...luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/31/2010 9:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:57:00 PM
Very good, Rachel. What you describe is life.
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:06:00 PM
Stephanie, Sylvia, Cynthia, Sybil- SHUT THE HELL UP. This was a great write Rachel, and yes, ignore the ignorant.
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:46:00 PM
Rachel, don't listen to the negativity below! this type of person is not welcome on the soup! this poem of yours is filled with honest emotion, most welcome here on the soup! actually, without realizing, this person validates your poem! how cool is that! smiles! don't let the turkeys get you down! (my Pop told me this, he's in Heaven) jimbo
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:14:00 PM
I agree with you . It should make one stronger. Enjoyed the read.
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