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I'M Gonna Chose a Name For You

I stay silent cause I don't wanna lose you I can't know the truth from your lies I care about you so much But I don't feel that you care enough You know me well but I don't know a thing about you You still anonymous for me I'm gonna chose a name for you so I can call you in my dreams I'm gonna chose a name for you so I can know for who I'm praying I'm gonna chose a name for you so I can tell the stars about you when they ask I'm gonna chose a name for you so I can know who's my beloved I'm gonna chose a name for you but.... I can't even find letters to chose from....My words are lost and I can't bring them back...

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White Sage

Date: 2/7/2016 5:24:00 PM

you pen such emotions in an extraordinary way, sometimes i feel like your pen has its way of looking into the future, excellent write Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/8/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thank you very much for your delightful comment, // :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/24/2015 2:54:00 AM

The letters of his name are in the echos of your very heart when the days are slow and the nights glow upon the shadows of your sensitive hips, your Beloved's name is in the rush of your veins sweet woman...I'm captivated by your thirst to know more of love...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/25/2015 7:08:00 PM

Thank you very much sweet justin for ur lovely and sweet sweet comment, I'm the one who's captured by u and ur poems and ur unforgettable comments , I'm sorry my friend if I took so long to reply but I didn't have Internet connection so I apologize..and I'm honored by ur lovely visit and ur amazing feedback , merry Christmas for you and happy new year....hugs / / :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/17/2015 1:13:00 PM

..... "so I can tell the stars about you when they ask" ...... maybe the stars already know - A great poem, Dalia - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/17/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear Anne for ur delightful comment , I'm glad u liked it..hugs / / :D

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/17/2015 8:50:00 AM

Dalia, an open ended poem that holds longing and power in the lines... Have a happy Holidays!smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/17/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, and happy sweet holiday for u to as I wish u a merry Christmas...hugs / / :D dalia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2015 7:52:00 AM

Interesting work..Very creative..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/17/2015 8:00:00 AM

Thank you my dear Sara for ur sweet comment...u r welcome and merry Christmas 4 u my friend..hugs :D dalia