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Im Going Down

An ocean once surrounded by land, Here I try to stay a float, with no help in hand, How can you let me go? I just don’t understand, Im going down, I know because I’ve been here before, You wont be at peace till I hit the ocean's floor,

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Date: 11/22/2014 2:25:00 PM
Great little rhyme Jayson, Enjoyed this. regards Kevin
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Jayson Rios
Date: 11/22/2014 8:08:00 PM
thank you!

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