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I'M Fine

I’m fine!! No really… Just fine! No worries… Go ahead Just walk away… See, I’m smiling Sorry, What’s that you said? There is a pooling of red Underneath my blouse? Oh this? It's nothing It’s just The blood trickling down From the gash in my heart That your words just made A minute ago Nothing really… I’m fine! Just walk on by! Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Richard D Seal

Date: 3/13/2013 7:21:00 AM

This is great work Eileen, I love these sort of poems, this exposes emotions in a beautifully sad way, really well done. I've been working on one for a couple of weeks called, words, similar message, I'll post when finished. Take care. Regards Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/31/2014 2:10:00 PM

Mr Seal....I was going through my old poems and reading some comments....looking for something, and I came upon this...a comment of yours that I haven't replied to. Please forgive me for this negligence. Thank you for taking the time to read and post. Life has its joys and sorrows...ups and downs. We take it as it comes.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/13/2013 12:39:00 AM

This was hard to read because it's painfully relate-able. Most don't realize the hurt they've caused (and quite often unintentional)... but it's in our nature to smile and pretend it wasn't a big deal, because you love them. And the ones you love are the ones that can hurt you the most. Emotion at it's rawest!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2013 5:36:00 AM

Timothy...you are right on the money. We can't get hurt by those who have no control over our hearts. It's the ones who do who can rip our hearts to shred! :( Having said that, we can do the same so...it goes both ways! Thanks for the post! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2013 8:19:00 AM

Sorry you were hurt today. Hugs Rick

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2013 5:35:00 AM

I've picked myself up! I'm moving on. Thanks for the care!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2013 8:16:00 AM

I can appreciate that sometimes a smile hides the pain underneath. Very powerful little poem.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/13/2013 5:34:00 AM

Yes....not many people can see beyond the surface. Maybe that's a good thing. I know from experience tha not many people are strong enough to handle that kind of pain. Have a good day, my dear.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/12/2013 2:15:00 AM

ooh this one hurts but it helps us realise we should be careful what we say or how we say it really xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2013 2:44:00 AM

Thanks for the post, Mandy! Always good to hear from you! hugs! Yes...I've wounded others as well, so I'm in no position to judge, but this poem just had a way of getting the better of me!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/11/2013 6:28:00 PM

Ya know what, we need to be Ike mood rings...turning different colors with our moods so people will know how they make us feel, wouldn't that be cool? Great poem Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2013 2:21:00 AM

DONNA...I'm one big mood ring! My face says it all! ;) Even when I try to smile...it comes out lopsided when I'm side. My friend told me, "Wll, that's a fake grin!" I'm a mood ring all by myself! Thanks for the love and care!

The Situation

Date: 3/11/2013 6:03:00 PM

some times we dont know what we are saying.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2013 2:19:00 AM

Yes, sometimes we just don't know...Those who love us will give us the benefit of the doubt, but a wound is a wound. Some heal easily...some don't. I take time!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/11/2013 4:26:00 PM

well said! makes the point perfectly...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 4:27:00 PM

Hi Ilene....Thanks for the visit! The post below is for Delysia! Don't know how this is happening. Second time today! Hmmmm...thanks for the visit! Missed ya! Hugs!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 4:26:00 PM

HIYA! Not really....no! Got me hurt today! Out of the blue! Oh well...I'm FINE must be the most told lie in the world...except...I really don't say it! I let them have an ear full, but today...I just couldn't find the words. Thanks for the visit! hugs!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 3/11/2013 4:24:00 PM

Ouch, my dear friend. I hope this is a work of fiction. A very passionate write. Well done :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 4:28:00 PM