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I'M Dreaming

I dream of you In the stillness of the night Your arms are the wind Holding me tight Whispering softly Calling my name It's your voice I hear, again and again My heart is full, yet empty too Because the one thing I want and can't have Is you

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John Patrick Robbins Aka Gonzo

Date: 5/13/2009 1:45:00 PM

That is a great write. it has a powerful flow to it and is just a all around great poem Poe would be proud

Fritz Purdum

Date: 11/15/2008 5:25:00 PM

Beautiful, I'm 45, I guess I write like I'm 19, Fritz Purdum

Joanie Yeager

Date: 11/14/2008 7:16:00 AM

Omg's awsomeness poem reminds me so much of me and my ex..And yea i gots a myspace my email is bluejsfly@aol.com so u can find me i caint talk that much because im kinda in the middle of computer class lol i sould have my profile set to unprivate so its gonna say im 18 lol my school dont allow myspace so i caint get on untill i get home at 4:25 add me when u can otays

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/14/2008 5:05:00 AM

Hi alexz, No I dislike no one. My time is extremely limited. I'm in my sixties ansd have a 7 day work schedule. My family time is also limited. You have some serious self esteem issues to resolve. I am assuming due to the adults in your life. God Bless you young lady and try to understand that you need to be you and to hell with anyone that doesn't accept you as you are. Get some help. Vince

Daver Austin

Date: 11/14/2008 4:56:00 AM

This flows, oh so nicely, the eternal yearning, always something or someone you can't have. Good write. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Steve Malebranche

Date: 11/13/2008 1:49:00 PM

it's always hard to want something that you can't have...your piece is a great piece to state that...

Catia Davis

Date: 11/13/2008 10:24:00 AM

nope i don't remember you. did i hang out with you alot?

Samantha Watts

Date: 11/12/2008 7:14:00 AM

i'm home sick today call me

Anthony Nicolo

Date: 11/11/2008 7:16:00 PM

Your poems have a nice rhythm to them and thanks for reading my poem. Ter's a couple of others thst I wrote that you may like as well.

Michael Torres

Date: 11/10/2008 7:55:00 PM

Alexz sorry I love this poem penned by you not Janice Micahel Torres

Michael Torres

Date: 11/10/2008 7:52:00 PM

Janice this wonderful. I love this poem .It is truly about love and is one of my favorites about love and loosing someone special. Wow you are truly gifted. Michael Torres

Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/10/2008 6:26:00 PM

youll probably forget about me in like 5 months, dont worry, this will all pass.