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I'M Broken

My feelings have being crushed My feelings have being hurt My feelings are now in the dirt You made these tears Opened up new fears I know the feeling of true pain Your ride was insane Took my heart for a race Only not to finish You didn't even come in last place Hope it was fun Now that i've landed on the ground My feelings have being crushed My feelings have being hurt Now my feelings sit in the dirt You woke me up now I'm alert My heart has being shattered Now to mend the peices

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2016 10:01:00 PM
margarette mcdonald, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:19:00 AM
MARGARETTE, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:35:00 PM
very nice poem.I've felt that feeling a time or two
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Date: 3/5/2011 8:21:00 AM
Very heart felt write...take care and don't ever let this happen to you again...good luck, Julie
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Date: 3/3/2011 10:46:00 AM
How sad for you but this too shall come to pass.
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