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I'M Breaking Up With You

Wow!!! The last time I saw you, you were not that beautiful; hair flowing to your shoulders like a waterfall vanishing in mid-air; a body worth building a temple for; and lips as sweet as those of an angel..... Remember how you left me in hell; a wasted man who has been treated like a child and dog simultaneously; you were so cold to me that my love for you froze. I am looking for a heart as warm as the noon Sun, to free my heart from your cold; I'm breaking up with you!!!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 5:13:00 PM

Hola, once again..>PD

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/24/2014 1:18:00 AM

Welcome on board, ma'am!! ^_^ <3

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2014 6:25:00 PM

Oh my Gosh, how many times did I stop by yesterday.. PD

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/18/2014 8:07:00 AM

Your visits are so sweet that I have stopped counting them................... ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2014 10:41:00 PM

:)...PD

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/17/2014 3:28:00 AM

^_^ *************

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2014 9:05:00 PM

Hello Teddy, glad you are well..Linda

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/25/2014 1:24:00 AM

Hello too, Linda. I am well...... What about you?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/21/2014 9:39:00 PM

How are you Teddy, :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/23/2014 12:45:00 AM

Good morning Linda! ^_^ I'm doing good!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/20/2014 11:48:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/21/2014 2:55:00 AM

Welcome, Linda. Anytime. Love, Teddy. <3 <3 <3

Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 5:52:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations..... Awesome break-up poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/21/2014 2:53:00 AM

Lol. It was poetic. Thanks for your applause Skat!! ^_^

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/20/2014 12:02:00 AM

Fabulous write Teddy really worthy of great win ! Big congrats !

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:45:00 AM

I really appreciate your applause Dr. Upma! ^_^

Tim Smith

Date: 6/19/2014 10:37:00 PM

Wonderful breakup Teddy...congrats

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:43:00 AM

Thanks Tim; Lol : D

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/19/2014 6:50:00 PM

A cruel fate... frozen in hell, lol, Big congrats on a terrific write and win!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/23/2014 1:15:00 AM

Please don't................we just met. Lol !!!!! : D

Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 6/20/2014 8:31:00 AM

You called me by the wrong name, now have to break up with you as well!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:39:00 AM

Thanks Casarah! "You're cold-hearted" statement put to reality, LOLEST!!!!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/19/2014 6:34:00 PM

Grats on your win, what a great break up ;)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:37:00 AM

LOL......... Thanks Casarah! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 2:19:00 PM

LOL, yes I have a fun sense of humor...Linda

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2014 1:33:00 AM

: D

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations, Teddy, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:43:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind observation and applause on my piece, Pandita!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:55:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram! ^_^

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 12:53:00 AM

Hi Teddy, weeee, thank you for the warm break-up.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2014 10:46:00 AM

LOLEST!!!!! ".........thank you for the warm break-up". You have a good sense of humor Linda! Well, than you for your applause and constant support!!!! Love, Teddy. <3 <3 <3

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2014 1:27:00 AM

Sad rhyme and reason for a break up, Teddy

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/12/2014 4:37:00 AM

Really sad.....