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I'M Addicted To You

Yes, I am addicted to you Was walking on a street and thinking of you Searching you around but where, I had no clue You are everywhere I go as if it’s not me, only you Am I still center of universe, or is it taken over by you I asked myself if I’m in love with someone in royal blue, This is not the first time but why feeling is brand new You made me crazy when I looked at you Yes Baby, I have always dreamt someone exactly like you I really don’t know if it is happening only with me I want to steal your heart but I am unable to foresee I want to feel you and take long breath with you Oh Ohh Sweety, I think I wanna grow older with you I know it is still “I” &”U” not “We”, But give me sometime, together we will make it a tree J Isn’t it surprising that I am writing a poem on you? O God! It’s crystal clear that I am addicted to you

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Date: 8/29/2014 6:10:00 PM
Such a sweet poem ^^ I love the line "I know it is still “I” &”U” not “We”, But give me sometime, together we will make it a tree J" - Looking forward to read more poems from you Doris
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/30/2014 1:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot Doris! :)
Date: 8/15/2014 12:26:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rajat - I choose your first very well written and lovely poem :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/30/2014 1:30:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 8/14/2014 6:57:00 PM
Rajat,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:44:00 AM
Well try, Rajat. You have a penchant to write. Take time to check my poems too.
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/30/2014 1:31:00 AM
thanks. Ya sure. I'll :)
Date: 8/13/2014 9:32:00 AM
Nice! And i really like the lines- "I asked myself if I’m in love with someone in royal blue, This is not the first time but why feeling is brand new"
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/13/2014 11:36:00 PM
Thanks. Guess, you believe in it as well.
Date: 8/13/2014 8:04:00 AM
Lovely romantic write well penned, Rajat. Namaste
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/13/2014 11:33:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 8/13/2014 7:21:00 AM
Hope you find a cure for this addiction and you steal her heart away:-) Hugs jan xx
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Rajat Singhal
Date: 8/13/2014 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Jan! I'll :)

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