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When favored by sun raindrops scattered through the trees form candles of light… Withered leaves are christened new with lucent rainbows streaming ______________________________________ 8/2/16 Inspired by Contest: One Tanka Resubmitted for this contest: Sponsored by Rick Parise

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2016 5:09:00 PM

Not a win??? WTF. Pardon my French!!! this is absolutely gorgeous. If you did not enter it for some reason, you need to use it for another contest sometime!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2016 5:36:00 AM

Great imagery Carrie. Thanks for your thoughtful visit and comment.

Anthony Mark

Date: 8/3/2016 3:32:00 AM

Yeah, read it fast then slow, dissected each line, felt it and fell in love with it...it's a visual treat, no weak line, each adds to the next, ...I hate its brilliance....damn your good..lol..Ian ( winks)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/2/2016 9:18:00 PM

You paint a vivid picture Carrie. Excellent!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/2/2016 8:57:00 PM

Just wonderful expressions in such a short form, "lucent rainbows dancing" don't think I've ever heard those 3 words together, magnificent! A7