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"illusive Heart"

"Illusive Heart" I feel lonely, and yet you are here. You hold me close; but, your heart isn't sincere. You utter bittersweet promises that all will come true. My heart doesn't believe anything; that is said, from you. Your just fooling yourself if you think I wouldn't know. All the covered up lies, that you have did; or ever told. I came to you that night and stated we were through. Leaving begging promises, my feelings; you left askew. Munipulator of words you try another hand.. What part of "we're through" do you not understand? I ultimately packed my heart and walked out forever. Finally feeling free, as much as I could endeavor.

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Date: 6/14/2009 10:21:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week. Keep your pen sailing in the ocean of ideals and ideas. You are a such a awesome poet
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:38:00 AM
Erin - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/10/2009 3:08:00 AM
you really get the feeling in this across. Great write
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem being featured>James
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:23:00 PM
Real love makes everything to experience and have to endure to get there worthwhile. Congratulations on such a deserving poem being featured this week. Beautifully written! Thanks for the read... <><
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Erin on "Illusive Heart" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Erin. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2009 9:44:00 PM
i know what thats like, this is a beautiful write, congrats on the features it is well deserved:)
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