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some questions better left unasked living illusions **august 10, 2010

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De R

Date: 9/7/2011 6:27:00 AM

Why is the sky blue? Why does chocolate taste so damn good? Why are oranges orange? Why am I blabbering ? :P Seriously now, good poem here and has a lot of depth in it. Enjoyed.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2010 11:32:00 PM

thanks for the number, Nikko. I will go later and check it out. It figures (about you and me. heehee). Well, don't stress yourself out now, ok? Be cool!! Luv,Andrea

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/14/2010 4:23:00 AM

Hello Nikko, gusto ko sa iyo ng isang Magandang linggo sa iyo! I enjoyed reading your Senryu, which is so true outspoken! I had been to see my oculist and had later problems to see anythin on my computer so I could'nt write anything. Thank you so much for your always kind comments. We are awaiting new rain on Sunday but hopefully we won't have flooding again. Lahat ng mga pinakamahusay na, Gert

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 8/13/2010 4:23:00 AM

oh nikko...a poem full of wisdom...^_^ v

Date: 8/11/2010 12:51:00 PM

So much truth to your words. You captured a lot for the reader to ponder in just three lines. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. Have a good day. Karen

John Rhinem

Date: 8/11/2010 1:30:00 AM

Smile ~ "Hello Dear Gifted & Precious Nikko Palmario" ~ What a pleasure and joy it was to see "Your Brightness" tonight dear lady and, "Thank You" for kind com dear!!! And "Yes," sometimes in hindsight We do learn; sometimes; that some questions are better never asked....I love "Your Loveliness'" philosophy here; just as I love "Your Talented & Creative Verse!!! ~ "Much Love & Warmth Always to You, & Those You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Day Dear Nikko, Bright With Love;" Bye!:) ~

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/10/2010 8:07:00 PM

that's honesty.and so right, you never know what you might get yourself into by just one question. ~Always&Forever

Chris Smith

Date: 8/10/2010 7:15:00 PM

Few words that speaks volumes, enjoyed this one ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 7:06:00 PM

Yes, that is true! Was this for any contest, Nikko?? What made you write it? Hey, thanks for commenting on my blog with your mouth watering foods. LUv, Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2010 5:52:00 PM

so true, excellent poem. Harry

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/10/2010 3:25:00 PM

Very thought provoking Nikko. So much said in so few words ~ Sharon :)

Skat A

Date: 8/10/2010 12:52:00 PM

NIKKO,Thanx's U 4 a wOnderful. POem. A nice way tO EXPRESS wOrds * luv~ SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/10/2010 12:49:00 PM

Nikko, hi there,,, i am so smiling at the thought of you and your check spelling mind.. LOL..don't worry your Senryu is awesome, and you are so cool.. thanks ,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/10/2010 12:10:00 PM

Well lots of people live lives this way Nikko..u captured it so well in your lines ... enjoyed your creativity today sweet friend..with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/10/2010 11:19:00 AM

good one

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2010 10:39:00 AM

You've got that one correct..Sometimes we live a lie and just don't want to face it..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/10/2010 10:04:00 AM

So true sleeping beauty, enjoyed your write this evening.. :) Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/10/2010 10:04:00 AM

Yes, there are questions that bring hurtful answers. Still, I prefer the truth to a "living illusion." Very compelling poem, Nikko. Food for thought! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2010 9:55:00 AM

Very probable. Excellent writing today Nikko. Love, Carol