Illusion

Peacefully dreaming Floating on the waves of your love I can feel myself drifting A utopia of pure romance Without a care in the world My body as light as a feather My soul free to soar amongst the eagles The shining light of your love Transcending all doubt or shame Just as the sun and moon Penetrate the full branches of the trees I am mesmerized by your eyes Captured by their glow Hypnotized by your words Your whispers lay soft upon my neck Caressing me with the heat of your passions Your kiss a mere reflection of your hunger Sparking the blaze within Tantalizing and tempting me In your arms I am swept away Embraced by the whirlwind Captive by your touch Imprisoned by pleasure Driven by desire I am yearning for your affection Everything you are cries out to me Everything I am is surrendered to you Our souls mingle and intertwine As one body, one spirit, and one mind

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/31/2010 8:40:00 PM

OH so lovely and romantic Lolita.. such beautiful descriptive words flowing into lines of pure luv... expressive and impressive creation from your gifted pen.. going to my favs now... luv.. Linda-Marie... thankxxx for your loving comments always on my poetry.. u are a dear friend.. also I just posted a new blog about a Valentine's Day poem co write.. check it out... luv..

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/10/2009 4:25:00 AM

Beautifully written! Love this part especially: "The shining light of your love Transcending all doubt or shame Just as the sun and moon Penetrate the full branches of the trees" - Just wonderful! ~Juliane

John Freeman

Date: 12/9/2009 11:38:00 AM

O yes! That soul meld lovemaking is the only way to complete what the Master of love intended it to be, between a man and a woman. Compared to the shallow stuff people do in this day, is like a child trying to put his socks on for the first. The divorces in this day are all the proof we humans need to establish this fact. Good job sister! Sincerely, Love Moses

Marty Owens

Date: 12/7/2009 7:40:00 PM

Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/7/2009 7:31:00 PM

"Floating on the waves of your love" great line, loved it. Nice work with a fabulous ending...Raul

Anita Longino

Date: 12/7/2009 5:35:00 PM

Beautifully descriptive. Great write. I enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for sharing. Sky

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2009 5:01:00 PM

Methings this is more than an "Illusion," Lolita. Anyone who can describe passion so well must have truly experienced the joy that love brings. Very nice! Love, Carolyn