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Illusion

Amid a multitude of thoughts she stood Screamed at some, gave in for few amid barking feelings she could Raise her voice but for just a few seconds before her weakness uttered words that made her heart cry out She could see her strength shudder and feel that all what she has sought the aim of being invincible, has gone the pursuit of freedom, has vanished The long for happiness has none of its effects on her dejected self that gave in for nothing self that almost had everything…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 8:50:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great YARA! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:02:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Yara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:15:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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