Illiterate

Illiterate is the rain Rolling down the windowpane But it can write your name

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/22/2013 1:49:00 AM

Wow, what a haiku this is! It's a bit on the clever side, but such an intimate piece of writing... congrats on your first place win! It's easy to see why it won...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:30:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Betim, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 8:51:00 PM

A very nice in the mood poem, Betim :-) Congratulations in Carrie's contest. xox~ Linda Linda

Wishu Sindhu

Date: 5/20/2013 2:44:00 PM

Awesome .. Extremely well done :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2013 2:33:00 PM

this is very imaginative!! Big congrats.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/20/2013 12:50:00 PM

Very clever...congratulations..

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/20/2013 10:54:00 AM

Congrats on your fine win. AO

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/20/2013 10:34:00 AM

A win well deserved. Visible and effective Haiku. Congratulations. Connie

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/20/2013 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful ....love this!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/2/2011 5:27:00 PM

love writting on the windows spelling backwards, enjoyed your haiku Betim,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/2/2011 3:44:00 PM

Very nice haiku with good images on illiterate