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I'Ll Take You With Me

They can check my pockets and all of the luggage They have the right to say take your shoes off But no scanner can see what inside my heart is No detector will catch I'm taking you with me I will bring you to a foreign land across the ocean, thousands of miles away Don't be afraid, let me hold your hand You have to trust me, everything will be okay I will keep you inside my heart Any places, everywhere I'll go I will hold your hand in my mind And when the time comes I'll bring you back home

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/15/2017 9:58:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, the examples and the way you ve written it was really excellent, but remember he willn t be physically present, whenever you will need him, he willn t be their for you, if you re in trouble he can t help you, if you re sad he willn t be their to lift your mood, but you ve written it sp beautifully, a love that will remain forever however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 4/5/2017 6:30:00 PM
I've read this so many times.
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A Moment Like This
Date: 4/6/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/21/2017 8:54:00 PM
Home again?
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Date: 7/2/2016 1:24:00 AM
this is great...LINDA-
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Date: 6/22/2016 8:04:00 AM
This is a truly beautiful write.
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A Moment Like This
Date: 6/22/2016 9:11:00 AM
Glad you like it ... There was much more I wanted to say, but somehow I was not able to put it on paper. So you have to read between the lines;)

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