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I'Ll Take the Sheep

I heard a relaxation tape That’s meant to help you sleep, Its soothing tones enticing you To slumber, sans the sheep. A female voice suggested That you focus on your day, Especially on upbeat things Encountered on your way. Think back on all the foods you ate, The veggies and the fruit, Reflecting on where they were grown And where they went en route. Next concentrate on someone who Brings joy and makes you smile And hopefully your eyes will close Or start to, in a while. The disembodied voice droned on, Releasing to the void Suggestions which may work for some, But just made me annoyed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/14/2023 8:24:00 AM
Ilene, the final stanza made me lol - stick to counting sheep in future:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/24/2023 10:31:00 AM
"The disembodied voice droned on, Releasing to the void" - I use something called "flash news briefing" every night which lulls me to sleep almost immediately, so I can relate to this.
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:57:00 PM
I don't have a problem falling to sleep. I'm out as soon as my head sinks in the pillow. What a blessing that is! So many of my friends of my age complain about sleep deficiency. I'd say my brain is designed for sleep efficiency! / Maurice
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Date: 4/16/2023 6:10:00 PM
Really enjoyed this one! Thanks for making me laugh :)
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Date: 4/15/2023 8:36:00 PM
I guess you 'lamb-asted' this relaxation tape, eh?! lol. Good one, ilene. ~ Confirmed Insomniac
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Date: 4/15/2023 8:01:00 PM
LOL. I think music works best or just reading. Thanks for the laugh, Ilene:)
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