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I'Ll Save You Again

You've saved me before, I'll save you again, you found me so shattered, betrayed and bent. Now I shall catch you, my love, as you fall, nothing's too big and nothing is too small. For it's not the time to blame and condemn, you've saved me before, I'll save you again. I understand your pain more than you think, promise our love will never go extinct. If you feel it's too much and can't go on, remember I'll go above and beyond. You've saved me before, I'll save you again there's nothing to lose and too much to gain. Remember that night I thought I would die? losing my sister, you held while I cried. You know me by now, I'll rid you of pain, you've saved me before, I'll save you again. Ten Syllables Per Line Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: January 30, 2016

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Date: 1/31/2016 1:45:00 AM
10 syllables per line, flowed very smoothly. Such an endearing piece, reciprocal love knows no bounds.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/31/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Dineen :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/30/2016 9:44:00 PM
This is excellent, Laura. I love it.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/31/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Daniel *Smiles* -luloo

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