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I'Ll Never Write Another Freakin' Poem

I’ll never write another freakin’ poem Be it Monoku or rambling tome No more to tap upon unruly keys Nor scribble on a pad be’twixt my knees Won’t argue with the gods of pace and meter For life within the poem becomes much sweeter When I execute hard echoes growing flimsy With the hardened edge of my poetic whimsy For beyond the guarded walls of castle’s keep Peasants wrote about rebellion in their sleep ‘Til those poems became the mantra of a life Unmetered rebels waging war – no drum and fife Therefore, e’er you chasten those who flee Remember they’re the ones who set you free. John G. Lawless ©7/7/2023

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Date: 7/9/2023 7:41:00 PM
I tag this a sonnet, on which rests a magnificent poetic bonnet. Great stuff, sir! ~ Freakin' Frank Zappa
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Date: 7/8/2023 4:46:00 PM
A real attention getter of a title, John. I agree with your thoughts on our poetry, my friend. Write On! From the heart, Bill
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Date: 7/7/2023 11:00:00 AM
...a 'freakin' poem.....yes, you wrote a 'free-ache-in' poem for the reader...... .....stan
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John Lawless
Date: 7/7/2023 11:11:00 AM
just spitting' out another poetic "fur ball" Stan....thanks for stopping by
Date: 7/7/2023 9:57:00 AM
What would we do without our edgy poet - it would be all too bland John :) I feel a kinship with those peasants too haha
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John Lawless
Date: 7/7/2023 11:09:00 AM
...i'll have the Bland sandwich with a side of meter and a bit of sanctimony for dessert.....what's the good of being in a cage if ya can't rattle it now and then
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2023 10:46:00 AM
Pin it on, Dilly!
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/7/2023 10:30:00 AM
I was going to wear it as a badge of honour Lin :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2023 10:19:00 AM
We're all peasants of the pen, Dilly, or so I think.
Date: 7/7/2023 9:42:00 AM
JOHN: This had better be a joke. The poetic edges of your poetic whimsy would be terribly missed. Say it isn't so.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2023 12:41:00 PM
I'll keep scratchin' if you keep writin'
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John Lawless
Date: 7/7/2023 11:06:00 AM
...the wit and whimsy of the wannabes ....not there's a contest theme.....tettin' ride of me would be like gettin' a tick off a hound dogs ass....
Date: 7/7/2023 9:24:00 AM
I write for myself John, I am crap at meter apart from limericks but some do like the sound of their own voices when it comes to certain forms and we are not kindergarten students lol. I hope you will stay around to enter my next contest - just waiting the ok from admin lol. talking of monoku i have posted a few today:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 11:32:00 AM
hahaha, more mucky stuff may hit the fan yet lol
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John Lawless
Date: 7/7/2023 11:04:00 AM
I'm not goin' anyplace.....I'm still tryin' to get the poop off my shoes from your last contest.....
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 10:24:00 AM
lol Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2023 9:42:00 AM
Waiting for admin... now that's a joke. Hold your contest, Jan.

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