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You whisper your vow: to love me in all the ways~~I want to be loved I'll Make Love to You Boys II Men For Silent One's Song Contest December 12, 2015

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Date: 12/22/2015 7:59:00 AM
your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:20:00 AM
A lovely romantic one liner, Eileen...short, yet conveys a meaningful wish...! Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/19/2015 8:35:00 AM
Fourth place, dear.....Thanks, anyway!!! :) Hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/19/2015 7:21:00 AM
...oh...just realized that this is a winning entry.....Congratulations!:)
Date: 12/14/2015 10:56:00 PM
EILEEN, Congratulations on your One Liner #7 win. **SKAT**
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2015 4:35:00 PM
SKAT....Thanks for stopping by my oneliner poem.
Date: 12/14/2015 12:52:00 AM
great song, and congrats on your placement... nad!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2015 4:35:00 PM
You've been way for some time, Dear. Welcome back. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 12/13/2015 7:20:00 PM
Congrats, Eileen. it's so nice to read this one again and see ALL the one liners together!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2015 4:36:00 PM
:) Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate the visit, dear.
Date: 12/13/2015 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thanks, Nayda. :)
Date: 12/13/2015 3:00:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/17/2015 4:37:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Jan. Will be by to see you tomorrow. Hugs
Date: 12/13/2015 2:33:00 PM
Excellent Eileen. They have really good harmony.
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Date: 12/13/2015 10:39:00 AM
Ha ha, I love how you play with your words. I suspect this will do well.
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Date: 12/13/2015 4:22:00 AM
Nicely written Eileen, Just one line of beautiful passion!! BEst wishes Kevin
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Date: 12/13/2015 2:14:00 AM
Excellent.Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/12/2015 11:55:00 PM
Beautiul!
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Date: 12/12/2015 7:43:00 PM
ooh la la. NICELY done!
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Date: 12/12/2015 12:18:00 PM
It's good to see you on this site again, Eileen. I have missed your clever writing, your passion, your hints of erotic lovemaking, and your exuberance. I'm going to look at some more of your latest stuff---and I hope you'll examine more of my recent writing too, As always, Dean
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Date: 12/12/2015 11:52:00 AM
A perfect romantic song for the Queen of Passion on soup:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx the 3 letter captcha is 'ace' lol how apt!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/12/2015 11:58:00 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I can't tell you how much I love this song....To love someone the way SHE wants to be loved....is a beautiful gift....Hugs, sweetie. I'm so glad to read your message. Hugs

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