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I'Ll Leave the Window Open

Gentle breeze come my way release your secrets held at bay I'll leave the window open even just a crack in hopes your winds ever slightly blow back into my never ending dream Gentle breeze set me free carry my worries out to sea I'll leave the window open and pull back the curtains in hopes her scent wafts aimlessly upon my storm tossed pillow Gentle breeze bring me solace guide her thoughts flawless in through my open window float past doubts and apprehensions into an inner sanctum bringing a whole to a fractured soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 10:34:00 AM
How I love this! You described feelings / thoughts I've had regarding the touch of breezes in ways I have not succeeded in doing. It is beautiful and touching on a personal level to me. A FAV ... 7 ... CayCay oh, I need give you may favorite response, WOW
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Date: 9/5/2016 2:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your poetry.I could feel the breeze blowing on me.
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Date: 8/29/2016 5:49:00 PM
Metaphorically lovely; love that gentle breeze that makes up for the worries on that storm tossed pillow. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/28/2016 3:26:00 AM
Nicely penned, Tim. I like the way it drifts in and out of rhyme...Very soothing. My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 8/26/2016 8:56:00 AM
This is a great read. I enjoy the way your intentions for this one unravel. A clever piece of poetry. I'll save for a tweet tomorrow.
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Date: 8/25/2016 10:33:00 PM
another mellow piece from you that idnites the senses, tim... goood work; wow!..huggs
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:48:00 PM
The breeze as metaphor for releasing woes is so nice. you are in top form with this one, Tim.
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Date: 8/25/2016 9:25:00 AM
This is another excellent write from your heart Tim. May all your breezes refresh and bring comfort to your life.
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Date: 8/24/2016 8:02:00 PM
Lovely write!
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Date: 8/24/2016 5:33:00 PM
So sweet the soft breeze, it is refreshingly bringing hope your way. Hugs xx
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful ..So beautiful...Exceptional post...Each line..Yes..I love it all. A FAVE.
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Date: 8/24/2016 3:25:00 PM
Very nice Tim, tranquility meets serenity on the gentle breeze flowing through the open window to your heart/soul. Very touching, typically you!#7
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Date: 8/24/2016 2:12:00 PM
Absolutely breathtaking Tim - I love the impact of the repeated phrase and the sense of longing woven throughout the poem is superb. Make sure you keep that window and the door to your heart wide open:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/24/2016 1:47:00 PM
Breathtaking..I love the spiritual feel, your words a lovely balm of gentle inspiration to ease and nurture the weary. Gorgeous writing Tim..a favourite :-) blessings, lynn
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