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Ill Do My Best

I see you with her I know we are one Though you promised god we are two Never have i thought you would do what you did And yes ive gotten time to heal I still can not stand her She is insecure And your eyes say your all lies Your voice is harsh towards me And i know i didnt do anything Sometimes i miss you and love you Sometimes i dont even care about you She wants to be best friend's And i can not let myself Only because of how i feel towards you She only want to be like me as from what others say So i do my best to be kind I do my best to be me And ill do my best to keep my feeling just to me.

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Mick Talbot

Date: 12/10/2017 11:33:00 PM

Been there, I've felt the pain, many years ago though. Horrible place to be, and you described it with a passion that evoked a bad memory for me. Happy to say I got lucky hope you do too. A sad but great read! Take care, best seasonal wishes, Mick!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/23/2017 4:14:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem, believe me that if he has rejected you na then forget about him because if he can leave you once, he can leave you second time also, just wait for the right moment and God will eventually send you the one you deserve, he ll love you the most, and it truly hurts when your ex is going somewhere with his/her new guy/girl and pretend that the one is better than you and although they are the one who leave us but still pretend that we care about you

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/13/2017 6:36:00 PM

Hi Amanda , nice to meet , beautiful emotional write very enjoyable read thanks for sharing :)))hugs from Ireland

Amanda Savage
Date: 6/13/2017 6:44:00 PM

Thank you for reading it! Im glad you enjoyed it. :)