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I'Ll Be Your Manattee Today

I'll be your Manattee today Warm fat and friendly and- I'm not going away

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/10/2018 7:37:00 AM

I love this clever haiku! Well done, dear Jannie! Hugs. Pandita

Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/10/2018 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Pandita Hugs back

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/1/2018 6:45:00 PM

Agreed with reviewers, Jannie, guessing like others...i can think of several wild creatures i have tripped upon in the forests of Northern Minnesota, my favorite by far which has even alighted on my arm to chat is the Raven, they can mimic like a Parrot, and tilt their head with understanding...gotta stay calm tho!

Jannie Breedt
Date: 3/2/2018 12:56:00 AM

Hi James. Northern Minnesota the? Its really nice to know where folks come from on PS. We have Indian Mynah here that also so darn clever but theyve become a pest now. A lot of people are killing them as they are aggressive to local bird live

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 1/20/2018 6:06:00 AM

Love Manatee's. They're the sirens of the sea, beautiful mermaids. For some reason I'm envisaging a voluptuous damsel reclining in some Rubens painting...

Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/21/2018 8:27:00 AM

Yes that does vome to mind. Thanks Leanne

James Inman

Date: 9/18/2017 12:12:00 PM

Clever and sweet Jannie.

Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/18/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thanks for ambling over James.yes , I thought to lightening up some

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/13/2017 7:35:00 AM

That sounds like a great idea. Lucky girl!

Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/13/2017 12:09:00 PM

Ha ha.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2017 1:46:00 AM

aww this is so sweet Jannie:-) I have only seen a manatee once when we visited the US many years ago and I thought they were so cute:-)I wonder what animal I would use to describe myself lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/13/2017 12:10:00 PM

Hi Jan. Im not going to venture an answer. I would like to think you are a beautiful doe. Thanks for stopping by again.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/13/2017 7:34:00 AM