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I'Ll Be Gone

Is my voice a melody? Did it make you want to hear more? Is my touch a caring one? Did it sent you quivering for sometime? Is my smile that awesome? Did it invite you to know me much more? Is my scent alluring? Did it attract you to have some more? Are my footsteps a familiar tone? that for sometime you hear alike you turn.. Are my thoughts an inspiration? Did it brighten your day somehow? Is my time spent with you that enough? ThaT I have left you lots memories.. Is "JUST BEING MYSELF" leave you a mark? So, You will miss me when I'm gone? by: olive_eloi 10:00pm 11/12/2013 --------------++

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Date: 11/3/2014 4:11:00 PM
Yes to all of the above. Another gem from your pen Olive, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/3/2014 9:35:00 PM
:) thanks much James.. :D!

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