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Ii Am Your Spiritual Twin

I don’t love you just because of your eyes, gentler than the summer rays. I don’t love you just because of your hair that fondles my dreams. I don’t love you just because of your body a masterpiece of the divine hand! I love you best because of your heart at the moment after sunrise on that sunny beach. When you kissed me and whispered, ‘I’m your spiritual twin!’"

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Date: 3/29/2024 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:15:00 AM
Slavyan, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:00:00 AM
Slavyan,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat
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Date: 5/14/2014 10:35:00 AM
Thank you for sharing:) It touched my heart
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:02:00 AM
Slavyan. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:45:00 PM
- It's not quite the way it works, you need to: Provide comments to regain comments. - I unfortunately can not go into f.book your page I do not have face book. - (Gossip book, I call it :) :) -) - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:35:00 PM
nice write and enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:47:00 AM
Slavyan, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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