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Generous to a fault Energetic when i talk Made of life and loss I remain no matter the cost Non-faded and steadfast I might not be first but never dead last

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Charlene Bird

Date: 4/21/2009 7:16:00 PM

This is just a wonderful piece with a steady flow all the way through.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/16/2009 3:08:00 PM

made of life and loss,so true we all are my friend- im not gemini but i enjoyed reading this,i have gemini friends and they are energetic when they talk ow so true;-)great-charma

Kat Crane

Date: 4/16/2009 11:48:00 AM

I love the line 'Made of life and loss'. This is so true of everyone, yet so many only think of the loss and let it wear them down. It makes me smile to think of you living in your non-faded glory. well done and thanks for the smile