Ignorance

I knocked the gate of hell No one answered I knocked again and no one answered I thought it was a mistake But suddenly I discovered I was knocking from inside. Soumit Dey

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 12:11:00 AM

dey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/22/2015 7:35:00 PM

SOUMIT :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Pradip Mondal

Date: 5/10/2010 10:02:00 AM

Nice ...short yet pregnant with strong ideas...there's a strong psychological profundity...keep creating... Comment by Pradip Mondal

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2010 6:33:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Soumit. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Sasha Marchlewski

Date: 4/25/2010 10:40:00 AM

Very nice! I look forward to reading more

Heather Bateman

Date: 4/25/2010 7:29:00 AM

Very good read this morning....Keep on writing -Heather-

Date: 4/24/2010 10:14:00 PM

Sounds like my marriage. Nice twist.

Joe Flach

Date: 4/24/2010 10:03:00 PM

Cool. I like the surprise ending.