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Ignorance

Basic concept is haunting near, aged wisdom in full gear. No defined map to express the way, wayward direction confuse the day. A force will hold back the power of the train, no mossback left this hour to go insane. To say, to say, to say it again, but no tool to release the message send. To be able to write, the makers gift, without proper education just gloom and drift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2009 10:55:00 PM
Judy, I can see where YOU are going to be a Welcomed addition to this site I thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on "A LOVE Letter Thank-YOU" YOU could have called the form of this POEM Rhyme YOUR POETRY Friend...HG
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Date: 1/5/2009 3:08:00 PM
Loved the beginning and the end, it really flowed as a river into my heart. Filled with vision and poetic vision. Enjoyed reading it and have a nice day.
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Date: 1/5/2009 11:46:00 AM
Great! i would have called it "mind block" for it discribes it perfectly. truely a good good work. John H. Loving III
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Date: 1/5/2009 10:45:00 AM
Hello Judy, thank you for your comment on Rhythms of Glass... This is a carefully constructed write Judy, with a slow momentum to its reading the last two lines feel more like a question than a statement... nice work !
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