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Ignited By Deception

The yellow neon sign casted a glow upon his chiselled cheekbones as the bustling sounds of a city that never slept droned on. He carried his troubles with him, like a worn out cloak, weighing him down in his every step. His mind was entwined in a thorny thicket. He has been haunted and bewildered since his introduction to her in a smoky speakeasy. She was a siren shadow amongst strangers of the night, whispering his name in the breeze, intoxicating his psyche with a tempestuous flame. She entangled him in a perilous dance, playing a game of chance. Their encounters were like unbridled wildfires. She captivated him, consuming his soul with her potent allure. He felt engulfed, delicate as a feather in a storm, swept away by her force. However he was a moth enticed by a relentless flame, she incinerated his dreams and made him feel hopeless. In the end, he succumbed to the hounds of disassociated reality. His story concluded in tragedy, leaving his loved ones cries to echo through the empty streets of a heartless city.

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Date: 11/9/2023 3:00:00 PM
I love the metaphor using a moth; moths are easily deceived by the light as was the man in your poem. The narrative was powerful; your imagery was compelling. I liked it. Am faving...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 11/4/2023 10:50:00 AM
Your words are encouraging and insightful. Its always a heartwarming experience. Thank you for uplifting me sis
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Date: 11/4/2023 7:03:00 AM
Sigh! Sis i felt this so deeply! And must i remind you once again, what a profound and talented storyteller you are! I really love especially the opening lines the imagery and descriptive flow , so delicately captivating! And how the story ends in tragedy is heart wrenching to read: pleasure always reading you! Sending you strength and light always!
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