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If You'Re Not Here With Me

My white Christmas dreams had come true, As the dim twilight began to close in, Then my winter wonderland faded to blue, I was lonesome with no happiness within. On a Christmas night, so lonely and blue, Surrounded by four decked, empty walls, Sitting by the tree, just thinking about you, As white snowflakes continued to fall. As the pine tree twinkled with brilliant light, My smile was lost, nowhere to be found, Though the ornaments were shining bright, I missed your warmth, not presently around. Pretty, paper packages of red and green, Are there, anticipating you at my door, The crackling fireside, cheerful and serene, Just as it was, the Christmas before. I long for your kiss under the mistletoe, So, how sad and lonely would I be, Looking out at that faded blue snow, If you're not here with me? Written by : Kelly Deschler For Giorgio V.'s contest - "A Song Inspires A Poem" My poem was inspired by the song, "Blue Christmas" by Elvis Presley

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Date: 12/21/2015 4:13:00 PM
Hi Kelly:) I enjoyed this lovely poem inspired by one of my fav songs/singers. ~ I would also like to take this opportunity to wish you a Joyous & Blessed Christmas*** Hugs ~~ paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/14/2016 7:05:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you for stopping by to read my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it... Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! Wishing you and your family all the best for 2016! :)
Date: 6/4/2014 8:56:00 PM
Kelly What a creative and wonderful write you have created. I could feel the loneliness and desire to be with someone that came from your heart. Thank you for the great comment on my Butterfly poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/5/2014 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Robin. I appreciate your nice comments very much!.... And, thank you so much for entering my "butterfly flutters by" contest!
Date: 2/10/2014 6:04:00 PM
A very nice win Kelly.... SKAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/13/2014 6:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, SKAT! I appreciate you stopping by. :)
Date: 1/11/2014 5:20:00 PM
I noticed this lovely lyrical work upon the winners' list..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/10/2014 1:55:00 PM
A very lovely/beautiful poem inspired by the Blue Christmas song my dear friend Kelly. Another very impressive write from you. Thank u so much for sharing. So love it & enjoyed. My big hearty congratulations on your well deserved great win! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/11/2014 4:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Leonora. It really means a lot coming from you! I appreciate you stopping by with such kind words! Hugs! :)
Date: 1/9/2014 9:17:00 AM
This poem was so well written Kelly, Congrats on your win......Hugs....Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/10/2014 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Roger! I appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/8/2014 11:19:00 PM
What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/9/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Ram! I really appreciate you stopping by.
Date: 1/4/2014 5:18:00 AM
So lovely and sincere. Good luck at the contest!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/8/2014 2:35:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 1/1/2014 4:38:00 PM
kelly, I think you did a fantastic job with this contest theme. It really lives up to that marvelous Presley song that I love so much! Happy new year!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/7/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. I love that song, too! And, I hope that 2014 is a terrific year for you!
Date: 1/1/2014 9:39:00 AM
Happy new year wishes to you Kelly. Hope you are keeping well. Very smooth flow of romantic thoughts in this impressive poem of yours. Good luck in the contest.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/3/2014 3:06:00 PM
I wish you a Happy New Year, too! I am doing well, thanks for asking. And, thank you very much for the great comments, Mustapha. That means a lot coming from you.
Date: 12/30/2013 10:40:00 PM
Oh! Kelly that is beautiful, I loved it and of course my favourite singer was Elvis, you deserve to do well in the comp. good luck. Vera
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, I really appreciate your wonderful comments, Vera! I am so glad that you enjoyed my poem! And, I hope that you and Peter have a Happy New Year!
Date: 12/29/2013 7:24:00 PM
I don't know the song, but you've written a beautiful poem. May you do well in the comp.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/31/2013 6:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Scott! You should take a listen to that song sometime, it is a Christmas classic!
Date: 12/28/2013 11:03:00 PM
Kelly What a great job you did on this one. You took the song and turned it into a wonderful write for the reader to enjoy. I could feel the sadness and sorrow from beginning to end. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Computerized People poem. Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2013 8:27:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I like the song chosen even though it is sad..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2013 7:45:00 PM
NICE BLUE CHRISTMAS WRITE LOVED IT, AFTER ALL I CAN'T HELP MYSELF IT IS MY FAVORITE CHRISTMAS SONG ALSO. CHERI AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY BLUE CHRISTMAS WRITE ALSO CHERI
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/28/2013 9:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cheri! Even though, "Blue Christmas" is a sad Christmas song, it is still a favorite!...And, you are most welcome, my friend! :)

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