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If You Listen Closely

Nothing is as important as being present In your own life. But for some, Life sometimes becomes submerged Beneath the dark waters of a secret place, No longer able to remember the past, Incapable of holding on to the present. And sometimes, On a quiet night, If you listen closely, You might hear those old imprisoned souls Screaming in silence That life is a hell of a thing To happen to a person. Author's note: This is for a couple of friends who are struggling with early-onset dementia.

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Date: 1/12/2024 8:19:00 AM
Such a touching, heartfelt poem Jim and so well written. So poignant, so profound, ’Beneath the dark waters of a secret place’ ‘ You might hear those old imprisoned souls’ - a real impact! Sorry to hear your friends are sadly affected too. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 1/12/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Christina.
Date: 1/5/2024 4:29:00 PM
Poignant write Jim. My dad is beginning to suffer at 84. Asking weird questions. Quite sad
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 1/6/2024 10:11:00 AM
Sad, indeed, Tom, thank you.
Date: 1/5/2024 2:40:00 PM
it's tragic when someone gets affected and have one's mind snatched and eroded by this disease. My sister passed away just recently from Alzheimer's. A powerful write Jim...anselmo
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 1/6/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Anselmo, and sorry for your loss.
Date: 1/5/2024 2:27:00 PM
I'm sorry to hear about your friends and I agree with your sentiments..
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 1/6/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, S O.
Date: 1/5/2024 10:47:00 AM
Wow Jim this is a real beauty! Poignant and meaningful! Great title, great poem! Im listening closely! Debx
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 1/5/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Deb.

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