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If You Don'T Watch the Sky

Today I turned into the sky, And I’m watching the world pass me by. But no one seems to notice me, Even though I’m as blue and open as the sea. Too caught up in yourselves, Too caught up in yourselves. You can’t see why, If you don’t watch the sky. Today I began to cry, So you all ran inside. Afraid to feel some rain, From someone else’s pain. Too caught up in yourselves, Too caught up in yourselves. You won’t see past the eye, If you don’t watch the sky. You know something isn’t right, When something so huge attracts no sight. What hope is there for you pigs, If you don’t even notice something so big? Too caught up in yourselves, Too caught up in yourselves. You’ll be living a lie, If you don’t watch the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/18/2010 8:30:00 AM
There are many who are really caught up in themselves. I like the flow of this piece and the rhyming sequence. The message is right on point. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/17/2010 7:04:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family ...so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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