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If You Can'T See My Mirrors

If you can't see my mirrors I can't see you Learn to stay back So we both have a view No I don't need an accident on my hands I 'll be observant as possible But you've got to understand If you're in my blind spot I won't see you I'm not a mind reader Don't make me feel blue So don't take chances If you're not sure Staying close beside me By the passengers door No don't ever cross In front of my path It's a stupid manoeuvre And it might be your last So to all the cyclist This is what I say It's a truck drivers nightmare Just to get through the day We will respect each other out on the roads But if you can't see my mirrors Just make sure you're on show Where a bright viz orange or yellow © Copyright KC. Leake 19th January 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/19/2015 6:16:00 PM
very nicely penned ...bikers are often in the blind spot....I agree with Tim ...
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/20/2015 3:32:00 AM
Hey thanks Joseph, appreciated your visit and your comment. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 1/19/2015 2:57:00 PM
There are so many tragedies on the roads Kevin - I wish it was compulsory for cyclists and motorbike users to wear high visibility clothing. You can imagine what it is like here on the Isle of Man with the TT races being held here - a mecca for bikers a potential nightmare for car drivers - great write a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/20/2015 3:31:00 AM
Hi Jan, Yeah' you can say that again bikers are the worst, in London you have to be extra vigilant. Because they will take unnecessary risks!!! And the amount of accidents that could be avoided, lets hope that drivers are taut to be more aware this includes everyone one on the road. Thanks for your comments they are appreciated. Best wishes Kevin
Date: 1/19/2015 1:43:00 PM
- In Norway we have great biking roads ..... but still they bikes in road traffic ...... scary !!! - Really well written, Kevin ! - Be careful in traffic ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/20/2015 3:22:00 AM
Thanks Anne, We all need to be more cautious. Appreciate your comments. Best wishes Kevin
Date: 1/19/2015 12:45:00 PM
Are you a truck driver Kevin? .... Many on the road have are offensive minded and are aggressive.... You always need to drive defensively
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/19/2015 12:59:00 PM
No! I was Just thinking from their point of view and the cyclist. I thought it would be good to write about. Thanks for your comments Tim, appreciated. It's nasty on today roads!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 1/19/2015 11:55:00 AM
Its all about respect and discipline to follow rules when We are on the road..Cyclists,drivers and pedestrians..Yes We have to be careful to avoid accidents..Wisely penned kevin : )
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/19/2015 1:03:00 PM
Hi Charma, I totally agree with you there on those points, it's tuff on the roads these days. And we would be wise to all take care and all be a bit more observant. Thanks for your comments as always they are appreciated. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 1/19/2015 10:39:00 AM
This is imaginative, thought provoking, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a thoughtful poem. Emile.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 1/19/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Emile, I appreciate your comments. Best Wishes Kevin

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