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If We Could Dance

Strumming along with my heartstrings Drawing me in with each note Playing the most beautiful love song Hearing the words that you wrote Filling in all the gaps The melody is for me Beating loud and clear Setting my heart free Only distance keeping us at bay You still have me in your trance Two hearts apart, beating as one How I wish we could dance A soft kiss upon a delicate hand Holding you close, holding you tight Slow dancing under moonlit skies The perfect girl, the perfect night

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Date: 12/7/2016 11:12:00 AM
- A warm romantic love dance,Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2016 1:56:00 PM
Good lyrics for a song, Tim. Love, daver
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Date: 12/6/2016 1:18:00 PM
This make any reader want to go dancing in the moonlight : )..Very beautiful and oozing with romance...A fave.
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Date: 12/6/2016 11:56:00 AM
Such a beautiful tender romantic poem Tim so sad she is not there to share the dance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
Dancing in the moonlight, Sounds terrific, Tim. Really nice:)
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:43:00 AM
Moonlit dancing, what more could one ask? Lovely tempo Tim. :)
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:19:00 AM
Tim, this was beautiful and it certainly does make me want to dance.
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:15:00 AM
The second stanza is the chorus, yes? This reads like a dance. A tender wish, a love song.
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:07:00 AM
Well, I'd say that is the perfect poem Tim. Very nice! :)
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