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If We Could Dance

Strumming my heartstrings Drawing me in with each note Playing the most beautiful song Hearing the words you wrote Filling in all the gaps The melody is for me Beating loud and clear Setting my heart free Only distance keeping us at bay You still have me in your trance Two hearts apart, beating as one How I wish we could dance A soft kiss upon your delicate hand Holding you close, holding you tight Slow dancing under the moonlit skies The perfect girl, the perfect night

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Fj Thomas

Date: 4/10/2018 2:41:00 PM

Tim this is a romantic beauty :)

Black Matta

Date: 2/24/2015 3:54:00 PM

Wow, very nice poem. As if I'm watching you dancing now with that girl under that moonlit sky. I like it!

Tim Smith
Date: 2/24/2015 11:41:00 PM

Thank you very much....Tim

Donna Jones

Date: 11/21/2014 5:52:00 PM

This is absolutely beautiful Tim....

Tim Smith
Date: 2/24/2015 11:41:00 PM

Thank you Donna....hugs Tim

Laura Cole

Date: 11/17/2014 6:53:00 PM

So lovely.

Tim Smith
Date: 2/24/2015 11:40:00 PM

Thank you Laura

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/5/2014 8:00:00 AM

beautifully painted piece tim dear pal excellent pen flowing

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:28:00 AM

Thank you liam my dear pal....cheers

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 11/5/2014 12:31:00 AM

Congratulations Tim on being featured as the poem of the day. You a gem... Verlena

Tim Smith
Date: 11/5/2014 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Verlena...hugs Tim

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/4/2014 10:50:00 PM

Wow Tim you could make a song out of that, it was lovely, congrat's on being the Poem of the Day, take care my friend...........Vera............

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 10:52:00 PM

Thank you Vera...you are so sweet.... Hugs Tim

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/4/2014 9:09:00 PM

Tim, Congratulations on Poem of the Day!! Very Well-Done!! Best Wishes, Gary

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 10:27:00 PM

Thank you Gary my good friend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/4/2014 5:26:00 PM

Just beautiful Tim! I much enjoyed it! So sweet and nice ! A7 from me! Congrats! Hugs and take care! :) xxxx D.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 7:01:00 PM

Thank You Dorian...hugs Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2014 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations on the poem of the day Tim, you are so good with a pen. :) loves and hugs eve

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 7:00:00 PM

Thanks Eve...hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 11/4/2014 2:15:00 PM

Just dropping back with my congrats for poem of the day for the perfect romantic poem:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:59:00 PM

Thanks Jan...hugs

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/4/2014 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on being the Poem of The Day! You've been very active on PS and I love this poem. Couldn't happen to a better person!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Carol...hugs Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/4/2014 10:05:00 AM

you fill my heart with music, tim.. ohh, so delicate and mellow.. yess!.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:53:00 PM

Thanks nette....a fabulous comment...hugs

David Meade

Date: 11/4/2014 7:26:00 AM

I heard the music of the heart, saw the dancing memories, and the felt longing of love separated by miles . . . thank-you for allowing me to participate in the dance. Awesome poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thanks David..It was a wonderful dance.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 11/4/2014 7:20:00 AM

Timmy you did it again congratulations on poetry of the day

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:49:00 PM

Thank you Jerry...glad this one didn't s**k....cheers

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/4/2014 6:28:00 AM

Oh baby look at that, poem of the day, way to rock sweets :) xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:45:00 PM

Thanks Cas...hugs

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/4/2014 6:12:00 AM

Congratulations on this exceptional write being chosen as poem of the day.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:44:00 PM

Thank you sir..I mean...oh I was right...sir

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/4/2014 5:59:00 AM

- Once again: Today's poem !!! - Congrats Tim !!!! - The perfect poem !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:42:00 PM

Thanks A-L...hugs Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2014 5:31:00 AM

The romantic one even though he leaves dirty dishes in the sink..I really enjoyed your passionate work..Sad to say my grandson's dishes mostly don't make it to the sink..Thanks for the visit..I was delighted..Sara

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:42:00 PM

lol...thanks Sara...hugs Tim

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 11/4/2014 4:44:00 AM

wow great work, i almost saw the perfect girl looking at me with glowing eyes. Congrat.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:41:00 PM

Thank you zakhe...I saw her too...cheers

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/4/2014 4:22:00 AM

Thankyou tps for picking such a beauty as poem of the day..Congrats. Tim..I love love this poem-Charma : )

Tim Smith
Date: 11/4/2014 6:39:00 PM

Thank you my dear...hugs Tim

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/3/2014 7:23:00 PM

Praying it happens everyday. Praying it is a lifelong union brings the happiness you both deserve. This is the best write of all. You draw the ink with your fountain pen straight from your heart. I have to fave this one. Keep it as a record of when everything black and white returned to a world once again full of color.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 10:30:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend.....cheers

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/3/2014 5:41:00 PM

Beautiful Tim, hope you have found the perfect girl, this is so romantic, if you can find the perfect girl like I have found the perfect man then you will have a happy blissful life, take care my friend......Vera.............

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 5:44:00 PM

Thanks Vera...I might have found her...hopefully she thinks the same...hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 11/3/2014 3:34:00 PM

Oh this is sweet music to my ears Tim - yet another stunning romantic write:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Jan....hugs Tim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2014 1:48:00 PM

A lovely rendezvous with romance in this beautiful piece Tim!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2014 1:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie....hugs Tim