Get Your Premium Membership

If We

If we were a beach then you would be the sand, diamond warmth, and I the shingle underfoot. If we were a pen then I would be invisible ink, and you a permanent marker, fluorescent. If we were wine you would be the vineyard, the grape, the wine list itself; I a bottle unopened, left corked. If we were a theatre I am the playbill of a show cancelled and unseen; you, the stage in spotlight: golden, applauded. I the tile and you the whole mosaic for us as a Roman floor; I a shattered pane and you the handle with us in the shape of a door. As clothing – you a shiny button, me a thread to be snipped. As hair – you a photographed trend, I a ponytail clipped. If we were a couple, Then you would be blind. If our love was a tape, I’d forever record, pause and rewind. If we were a cake you would be the fingertip licked icing and I a batter filled lump. If we were a body then you would be the heart and I the blood you pump.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/28/2019 8:31:00 AM
Awesome poem, Thomas. I clung to every word. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your most deserving win.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/27/2019 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your 6th place win in the contest, the end line was a zinger, very strong work. I also loved the play of metaphors to convey the love. Bravo
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2019 2:54:00 PM
This might be the King of metaphors Thomas. So very creative! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2019 8:59:00 AM
I love the intimate feel of this piece. Thanks for entering my contest.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs