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if today you must go, in search of your light, that shines dimly in my eyes, but it is a light i can't deny. if today you kiss me goodbye, i will kiss you back solemnly, and stretch my lips into a big smile, i want you to see me happy at the least. if today you find your dream, my soul shall rest in peace, i wouldn't have made no mistakes, for having let go of you today.

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Date: 7/2/2015 11:54:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup, Dechen :) - Thank you for your first poem :) - A lovely poem ! - I'll be glad to read more from you in the future :) - I wish you good luck with your poems and comments - // Anne-Lise :)
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Dechen Pelki
Date: 7/22/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) for reading my poem and the warm welcome. I have taken some time to get back to you...
Date: 6/30/2015 10:38:00 PM
Hello Dechen, a deep poem, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Dechen Pelki
Date: 7/1/2015 5:21:00 PM
:)) hello SKAT! thank you for the warm welcome and i would love to be your new poetry soup friends as well! :) Well, about me, I am an amateur poet too happy to have discovered this community. I enjoy writing poetry but I enjoy it a lot more when people actually read it and have wonderful comments. :) lots of hugs!
Date: 6/30/2015 5:01:00 PM
Dechen, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dechen Pelki
Date: 6/30/2015 5:11:00 PM
Thank you very much! :)) it feels like i have finally found my community :)

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