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If This Would Be My Last Day

If this would be my last day I would not want to meet Any of my near & dear ones If this would be my last day I would not text any of my vanished friends If this would be my last day I would not eat anything special or what I love to taste If this would be my last day I would not watch My old photographs If this would be my last day I would not be nostalgic Or in sad state If this would be my last day I would not leave any letter Even if I died, I wouldn't want to see who've cried, I wouldn't want to hear who said what on my funeral I wouldn't want to know Who is remembering me 'cz if this would be my last day I would want everything to last with this day 30 Aug 2020

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/30/2020 10:42:00 AM

Both Silent one & Probir are very correct. Such a sad and deep poem. But my sweet friend I hope this is just a verse and not the way you feel... Life is to preciouses to think of leaving. A different direction I would walk to lift my spirits and stay away from those that would make me feel this way... If the verse was true. Hugs Eve

Sakshi Singh
Date: 8/30/2020 7:52:00 PM

Believe me I am fine, I'm alright. This is only a verse i imagined that way. I love your & other PS members' caring nature Eve, always & thank you so much for your warm words. Hugs :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/30/2020 10:18:00 AM

Though the sudden positive turn at the last line breaks the ashen emotions throughout the poem, the repetitive negativity sounds somewhat unusual, especially from a comparatively young poet. Powerful write ...

Sakshi Singh
Date: 8/30/2020 7:47:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Silent One

Date: 8/30/2020 3:23:00 AM

Sadly we never know when it is our last day and when we do die, we do not know what is left behind... you are far too young for these thoughts dear... a Deeply emotive poem...

Sakshi Singh
Date: 8/30/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment!