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If This World Was Mine

the world of love no negativity or diseases the diseases that spread through violence no pain no tears just the pursuit of happiness the voices of pursuing success no failure or people left behind no judgment just the fatal attraction of inner appeal ask and thy shall receive answers no silent lips of abuse just the tongues of love the taste of a lavish lifestyle, without the materialistic of fashion the art of live that sometimes, we forget to be unforgotten left behind the chains of separation racism that still smothers the world with a closed blanket the true reality of what we are , resolves in the environment and family that we have resolute the problems before its a conflict live for today and the goals of the future

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Date: 7/14/2010 11:31:00 AM
Wonderful words in your poetry Fago, many congratulations on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Fago on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:46:00 PM
Congrats Fago on your winning poem in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy .. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations Fago on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Fago. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 10:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/30/2010 2:42:00 PM
Interesting thoughts for the reader to ponder about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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