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If Only You Knew

If only you knew the width of his love, The breadth of his love, and you simply knew how… How he sighs, and how his dark clouds of sighs Explode; and how flood does his head-high rise; If you knew, how his tongue, by furling its wings, Snorts, and with untold pains he gravely wrings; How dreadful darts of love piers his heart; And how blood floods and blots this piece of art. If only you knew the depth of his love, The breadth of his love, and you simply knew how… How deep in his dreams, he sighs to say you He loves you, and yearns to love you - anew. If only you knew…if only you knew… If only you knew…how deeply he loves you. *HM Placement* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 30, 2020) Oct. 24, 2020 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(35) any theme any form Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand *A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 26, 2020) Oct. 24, 2020 If only you knew Poetry Contest Contest sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/31/2020 9:10:00 AM
I can feel a spirit apart from this world. Enjoyed reading your winner. Congrats on being on the winners list. Sara
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Date: 10/31/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this immensely sweet comment!!
Date: 10/27/2020 5:17:00 PM
Oh, dazzling, Newton. I'm deeply touched by your love poem so sincere. Utterly deserved Top, Win, - Congratulations my dear!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/28/2020 3:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this immensely generous, pleasing comment!!
Date: 10/27/2020 8:41:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2020 9:08:00 PM
Congratulation on your win. It is a great poem.Wish you all the best...!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/27/2020 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Loving Kindness, for your revisit and the great comment with a complement!!
Date: 10/26/2020 8:56:00 PM
Lovely write of yearning love, Newton, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/27/2020 3:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve, for this lovely comment and the complement!!
Date: 10/26/2020 8:22:00 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win! :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 8:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/26/2020 5:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark!!
Date: 10/26/2020 11:11:00 AM
Hi Newton, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for this wonderfully great comment!!
Date: 10/26/2020 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement..
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One, for your comment and the great placement!!
Date: 10/26/2020 6:05:00 AM
- A deep and beautiful love ... best wishes in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/26/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/24/2020 5:29:00 PM
Just beautiful , Newton. Makes me wonder if you are the "he" of the poem!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/24/2020 5:35:00 PM
Sure, once..., and still, this he is me! Thank you so much, Andrea, for this immensely great comment!!

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