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If Only If We Were Together

In the dark, I live and die; Feel the emotions Inside Keep them there Do not tell Who could care I'll go to hell But a light keeps Shining through And emotions seep Into you Do you feel it, This feeling in me? What is it that You cannot see? Is it true? Is it right? Can I see you Tonight? All I have, All I am Is in these words; If only I could say them To you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 6:01:00 PM
then sign up to windows live messenger and get urself a hotmail account :P makes everything sooo much easier for ya. but yeah, a myspace profile then? oh yeah, and this poem is quite gud by the ways, hopelessly romantic wud be a gud description =)
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Date: 11/10/2008 3:25:00 PM
Yes, the frozen self, which seems to be what ego demands, fear of rejection. Round and round but no release. That's what I'm getting. I like this one, Alexz. Thanks for reading my alcoholic thing. Years ago I was probably going through what your dreamer is going through. Love, daver
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