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If they could look into your heart and see what I see when I read your awesome poetry, they would never stop telling you, what an amazing person you are. If they could see your love for God they would see the person who is at least trying to be a better person then they would never stop apologising for not noticing before now. If they walked one day in your shoes they would feel the pain you feel, cry the tears you shed and never ever let one more day go by without telling you you are the best. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 11.17.2014 For Cathie Lindsey's Contest It's All About Me 1st

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/24/2014 8:45:00 AM

Belated Congratulations on your win with this sensitive touching write.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Maurice.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/20/2014 8:29:00 PM

Brenda, this is such a wonderful, warm tribute that I am was very uplifting for her. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/24/2014 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Sandra.

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/19/2014 8:37:00 PM

Wonderful write!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/19/2014 11:09:00 PM

Thanks Casarah

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/19/2014 4:29:00 PM

Most Beautiful!! Most Wonderful!! Brenda. Congratulations too. Best Always, Gary

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/19/2014 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/19/2014 2:43:00 PM

Way to go Brenda, Congrats!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/19/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Richard

Earl Schumacker

Date: 11/19/2014 2:05:00 PM

Hi Brenda, Very nice tribute. Very nice indeed. Have a pleasant day. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/19/2014 6:17:00 PM

Thanks Earl

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2014 11:54:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 6:57:00 PM

Thanks Jan. XOXO

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2014 1:31:00 AM

Perfect Brenda - I do hope this does well for you - I think we can all learn a great deal from this write:-) hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 6:55:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/17/2014 10:52:00 PM

Excellent poem you've penned here Brenda! Sadly so many things can go unnoticed by those around us sometimes. very sad but that's the way it's life not fair to the person in your poem. I get the topic and what's behind it I believe.GL in the contest my dear friend. A 7 for me! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Dorian.