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if only

i can see it in your eyes 
i feel it in touch 
your fixing to tell me goodbye
i dread that day so much

all i ever wanted was to your love
but its not me that your wanting
but someone in your homeland
that puts her on a higher pedestal way up above

please dont hurt me 
please dont make me cry
if you,ll just stay here
i,ll love you till i die

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  1. Date: 12/27/2010 8:32:00 PM
    deep and beautiful write, enjoyed,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/23/2010 7:29:00 PM
    aww this is so sad.I can feel the emotion, like its happening to me.