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If only my thoughts could filter the summer breeze to places that many could see then I could start the words for the wind to carry away maybe for someone to catch one day If only my actions could travel like the leaves have been blown to places to many left unknown the mystery would reveal the true meaning of life If only one could remember the first kiss of sunshine on the face then maybe you would want the summer to stay

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Date: 8/8/2009 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem Cecilia>>James
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Date: 8/4/2009 11:12:00 AM
Good afternoon Cecilia. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:56:00 PM
A lovely write! Thank you for commenting on my work, always appreciated!
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Date: 4/17/2009 3:26:00 PM
very refreshing perspective Miss Long. Welcome to the Soup-AA
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:48:00 PM
Captivating and magical, Cecilia! You have let the wind carry your words, and we are eager to "catch" them. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2009 3:08:00 PM
Nice work Cecilia and welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
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Date: 4/14/2009 10:53:00 AM
i love this nice job
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