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If Not Gets No Talk

something is deserved if got everything is all if not nothing's well something's not deserved if got smiles and feels okay if not gets no talk

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/5/2015 2:54:00 AM

Very nice pen BL! A beautifully written senryu dear friend.A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light! God bless you:) D.

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/5/2015 7:07:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with appreciation and for 7. Loved always,bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/4/2015 9:52:00 AM

Oh brilliant BL,,,i always feel one wants what they have not got,,but when one as got it, they lose interest in it,,,this is a material thing,,i speak of, not a spiritual thing,,your poetry give so many reason for one to think and think hard too!

Bl Devnath
Date: 6/4/2015 10:02:00 AM

Loved your very nice comment my very lovely friend. Your comment always means a lot to me. Loved always,bl