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If Made a Man

If made a man, I’d treat my woman right By that I mean, I’d hold her through the night I’d use my arms to shelter fragile form Her tears I’d kiss and help to calm her storm I’d listen to each word immersed in fear And vow to shield her by my presence near If made a man, I’d show her I was strong This strength I’d use to never do her wrong I’d use my words to make her melting start Released to touch, they would caress each part I’d look at her with eyes that claimed her fine With tempered fierceness, show her she is mine I’d pull and crush her tightly to my chest Inhale her scent, feel softness of her breast Undress her while I utter words of love Assure her she’ll ascend to heights above I’d claim her mouth, my tongue set to explore Foretaste of what I’ll do to her and more Her stately neck I’d graze with hungry lips My fingers trailing curves of waist and hips I’ll lose myself in softness of her breasts Tongue, mouth, and hands employed in lover’s quest Her navel traced with roving hungry hand Sent to explore as though revirgined land Her sighs and moans, my patient hands would heed On love’s submission would my mouth then feed Pleased that I’ve set her longing soul to flight My reigned in passion I’d release with might I’d smooth her hair until she gains her ground The voice of love the only living sound And when she’d turn her eyes to look at me I’d say, “Again? Or should I let you be?!” Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/18/2017 4:47:00 AM
Men need to read this slowly....digest it, and then read it again. For those fellows who don't have a clue how to please a woman...they should memorize this! A FAVE from me Eileen! You have outdone yourself! : )
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Date: 7/17/2014 11:34:00 AM
Superb for sure every man's read
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Date: 12/26/2013 11:09:00 PM
LOL You are too beautiful and wise to be made a man, but a lovely poem none the less!!!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 12:48:00 AM
HA HA HA HA!!! WOW!!!!!!!! What an admission from a man! Arthur.....this is TOO CUTE! Thank you for this lovely post. :) I ADORE MEN.....I just love to tease them. Hugs
Date: 12/24/2013 11:21:00 AM
Its nice to dream right Eileen lol, got the ol heart racing though, isee what the woman desires, but honestly most men are selfish in this area, except me of course,lol,blessings Carl
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 12:50:00 AM
Ah....glad you are not the selfish kind, Carl. A man is a successful lover when he has been able to make his woman feel loved and satisfied. If only in that respect...I'd love to be a man....I'd surely know what it takes. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 12/24/2013 9:38:00 AM
oh boy, Eileen, the guys are gonna look at this and say WHAT???? Honestly, I don't think too many could do all this and then turn right around and do it again!! But wow, you paint a picture of what a woman dreams of!!! YOu are a poetess of graciousness AND passion!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/27/2013 12:47:00 AM
HAHAHAHA!!!!!!! Depends on the age, my dear. I remember a time when that was possible. Oh well....we can't help but hope, eh? Thanks for your lovely visit, my dear....and for the lovely post. I'm thrilled with it!
Date: 12/23/2013 12:43:00 AM
Well done I would say you captured it well. I gotta tell you it's pretty amazing being a guy especially if you find the right woman. Goodbye till tomorrow Eileen. It was a treat to read three poems this evening.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/23/2013 11:07:00 AM
I'm glad you got the chance to visit me. Well, I don't KNOW what it is like to be a man. I know and am so happy I'm a woman....nothing like it. Sometimes....I just think men need a little help to get and understand all our intricacies....:) Hope you are having a great day!
Date: 12/22/2013 9:07:00 PM
Woweeeee...its hot here even in the middle of our ice storm!:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/23/2013 11:08:00 AM
:) Well....enjoy the heat while you can, sweetie! This kind of heat is the best kind! ;) Hugs!
Date: 12/22/2013 9:52:00 AM
I is so proud of you, literally, putting yourself in another's shoe. Nicely done...mouthy tongue and all...YUM! =D
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/23/2013 11:09:00 AM
YUM!!!! ;) What a delicious and yummy post from you, Drake! Thanks for the encouragement! Hugs!
Date: 12/22/2013 7:15:00 AM
Wow wow wow Fabulous. Again, again lol, waits for slap lol. Definately one of your best. Take care, Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/23/2013 11:10:00 AM
I'm not sure sure of THAT, Mr Seal......Once...Crooked...hope of becoming straight is.....well....beyond reach! ;) You are a very naughty man!
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/22/2013 8:43:00 AM
I'll say it's making me straight haha
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/22/2013 8:41:00 AM
Again again hahaha
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/22/2013 8:31:00 AM
Good........Let's see if that sets you straight, Mr Seal...........
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Richard D Seal
Date: 12/22/2013 7:54:00 AM
Again again lol ...............
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/22/2013 7:47:00 AM
Are your hands smarting yet???? Hmmmmmm.....

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