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If Love Were Enough

If Gratitude were enough, I’d fill the oceans with mine for having you If laughter were enough, I’d make you laugh till your last breath, Just so I can hear that beautiful sound for eternity If dancing was enough, I’d waltz and foxtrot with you till your feet hurt If tenderness was enough, I’d then spend the rest of the day massaging those feet Just so I can take the aching away If life were enough, I’d trade mine for yours in a heartbeat Just so you can live to fulfil all your heart’s desires, As all I want for you is your never-ending joy, Your gentleness, coyness, kindness And if love were enough, I’d love you in and out of time, As I love you from this day onwards, I will love you beyond my final breath I LOVE YOU…

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/30/2022 5:30:00 AM

A lovely poem about love eternal. I really enjoyed reading!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 10/15/2021 7:51:00 AM

Had to come back and revisit this marvelous gracious loving verse. Again thank you for sharing your gift. Be at Peace and allow Joy to embrace you be sad and not rejoice in your works God bless . Truly a FAV for me. A righteous Write. Write on. : ) James

Sharon Chirau
Date: 1/24/2022 1:09:00 AM

Aww thank you so much James! God bless you too!! :)

Ricky Muse

Date: 10/7/2021 6:14:00 PM

Heartfelt piece indeed. I really dig the line "if love were enough, I’d love you in and out of time."

Sharon Chirau
Date: 1/24/2022 1:08:00 AM

Thank you Richard! Really appreciate the comment :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/7/2021 6:04:00 AM

How enchanting! Love this passionate love-song, Dear Friend..it has made my eyes teary. " If life were enough..." - what an amazing phrase you have created! Sending to my faves. Best wishes ~ Mala

Sharon Chirau
Date: 1/24/2022 12:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Mala! You have made my day :) Sorry for the insanely late response. Have finally conquered my writer's block and I'm happy to be back...Best Wishes! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/19/2021 10:18:00 AM

A Very Beautiful Poem!

Sharon Chirau
Date: 1/24/2022 12:57:00 AM

Thank you so much! :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/22/2020 2:02:00 AM

wow like a sweetest song on love; just I love it

Sharon Chirau
Date: 12/11/2020 1:45:00 AM

Thank you Mahtab! :)

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 1/8/2019 4:45:00 PM

This was just great, you blew my mind away with this piece. Very well done

Sharon Chirau
Date: 4/9/2019 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Kudzai, really appreciate it! :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/12/2018 12:28:00 PM

This is a true love story Sharon, very well done and it is inspiring my friend!

Sharon Chirau
Date: 4/9/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Bobby, much appreciated! :)

Lemayian Leksat

Date: 11/10/2018 1:13:00 PM

Your beloved is really loved...can't be said better! Very creative...I keep reading through again and again. Thank you Sharon.

Sharon Chirau
Date: 11/12/2018 3:54:00 AM

Thank you Lemayian, really appreciate your thoughts :)

William Darnell Sr.

Date: 11/5/2018 5:15:00 PM

Great write and beautiful read Sharon. Love it, it was so inspiring. Thank you so much! William ??

Sharon Chirau
Date: 11/6/2018 1:34:00 AM

Thank you so much William! :)

Marc Satz

Date: 10/31/2018 4:12:00 PM

I love the overall structure of your poem. I love the question and responsorial element of it. I love your imagery. And finally, I love your pic.

Sharon Chirau
Date: 11/1/2018 9:17:00 AM

Aww thank you so much Marc! Lol too bad I can't see your pic too haha cheers!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/19/2018 10:24:00 PM

This is beautiful and inspiring Sharon. Aloha, Connie

Sharon Chirau
Date: 11/1/2018 9:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Connie! Aloha :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/17/2018 3:24:00 PM

Such a lovely living piece Sharon, penned with great insight and imagery. Simply super! Have great day,Gordon

Sharon Chirau
Date: 10/18/2018 2:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Gordon! Much appreciated :)

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 10/12/2018 8:16:00 AM

How lovely indeed. Amen, Blessings.

Sharon Chirau
Date: 10/18/2018 2:30:00 AM

Blessings to you too Ronald! thank you so much!

James Inman

Date: 10/8/2018 6:46:00 AM

A beautiful sentimental write that I could easy hear being used as vows in a wedding.

Sharon Chirau
Date: 10/8/2018 7:13:00 AM

Thank you James! I actually did write that piece for my best friend as an inspiration for his vows on his wedding day :)

Xuefeng Pan

Date: 9/22/2018 12:06:00 PM

deeply touched and completely melted by the love you promised to give cheers!

Sharon Chirau
Date: 10/8/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Xuefeng! Really appreciate your kind comment :)

Silent One

Date: 9/19/2018 5:04:00 AM

Beautiful poem of love and commitment Sharon..

Sharon Chirau
Date: 10/18/2018 2:31:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 8/31/2018 9:20:00 PM

Such a beautiful lovely write =D James

Sharon Chirau
Date: 9/3/2018 3:27:00 AM

Thank you James, much appreciated :)

Reta Pruitt

Date: 8/23/2018 9:53:00 PM

So much genuine feeling in this poem. Everyone would love to be so loved. TBTY, Reta.

Sharon Chirau
Date: 9/3/2018 3:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Reta :) Absolutely, everyone deserves to be loved :)