If Known
We desire to be successful
remain guided by dream of win
but fail to see the truth stressful
hiding with grin.
We try to follow dream without
knowing exactly what we want;
fact it’s not easy to stand out,
Its not for jaunt.
One needs vision, goals, attitude
ambition, motivation, trust,
grit, tenacity to improve
also needs thrust.
If known to win what to harness
may be we would not have started.
~X~X~X~
Sapphic Ode Sonnet is a hybrid sonnet form created by Jeremy Farmer.
The elements of the Sapphic Ode Sonnet are:
- A quatorzain made up of 3 quatrains followed by a couplet.
- Metric, iambic, L1-L3 of each quatrain, tetrameter, L4 of each quatrain is dimeter [8-8-8-4]
the concluding couplet is tetrameter.
-Rhymed, rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef gg.
-Pivot at the discretion of the poet.
Pasted from http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/forums/topic/1240-sapphic-stanza-adonic-line-sapphic-line-and-sapphic-ode-sonnet/
Thanks to Judi Van Gorder for the resource at Poetry Magnum Opus Site.
Copyright © Pratap Roy | Year Posted 2021
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