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If In Our Next Life

Co-wrote by "Mi Amante Alma" - Middle Verse If we are both single when we are 30, then lets go for a dance, a drink, and a late night walk and see where things go. Let the passion lead us. Our souls will bring us where we must go this walk of life. And if I never lie within your arms, and this life leaves us only scorned, wondering what could have happened - if only. Then swear in the next life we will find each other. ~ If In our next life we meet again I'll burn a memory into my mind to not let you go again if I become a rich man I'll spend every last cent to find you if I were given a year till my death I'll search till my last breath to find you and tell you I loved you since life began and if I never find you in our next life my only regret will be that I never loved you the way my heart wanted to ~ If in our next life, I find that I am alone, I will wish on the stars, wish on my heart, wish for you on my soul. If I am born poor, and I have nothing to live for, my dreams of you will keep me going. I will sing I will pray I will look everyday and if you even walk by, I will know you by chance, take your hand, and you will see it in my eyes. If in our next life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2014 7:15:00 PM
This should be a song, absolutly a gorgeous piece.
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Date: 4/3/2014 1:46:00 PM
simply beautiful...... Follow your heart... here and then... PD
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:53:00 AM
Delightfully different! Wonderfully written! Poetically profound! 7 my best, chuck
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Date: 3/2/2014 1:34:00 AM
Beautifully written Jay... Enjoyed reading this poem... Thanks for If In Our Next Life... :) Verlena
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:52:00 PM
wow, this is a very interesting poem! So have you married this soul mate of yours by now? I sure hope so. It seems this is a match made in heaven!! Glad you thought my poet sonnet was funny!
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Date: 3/1/2014 1:04:00 PM
Nice interesting write. You have ended the last line in your second verse with a preposition. I have a suggestion to correct that grammatical flaw: how about replacing "wanted to" with "had wished"? That was just a helpful suggestion. Everything else looks appropriate.
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Date: 3/1/2014 10:34:00 AM
a magnificent weaving of verse...very much enjoyed it
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:28:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning. My eyes were simply captured as I read through each line with such awe. Fantastic job.
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Date: 2/22/2014 3:39:00 PM
- Jay, a plan that was enjoyable to read - But, do not forget to live this life also my friend. - Have a fun weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2014 1:46:00 PM
Make the next life now, not tomorrow. This love is real, and fearful, and joyful, and full of hunger running two ways, passion and desperate need with the chance of total embrace, or with a lost race against place and time. This is a masterpiece of the heart. I love it. A sport of love and lust. J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 2/21/2014 1:47:00 PM
Makes me want to fight for love.
Date: 2/21/2014 1:18:00 PM
ahhhh...this is nothing but an " extremely" Lovely, Jay!!!!...i'm glad to read one of your creative writes...kudos!!! ..magnifico!..^__^
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