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If I was your smartphone You would talk to me for hours If I was your smartphone You would hold me and make sure I was safe If I was your smartphone You would keep me close and check on me often If I was your smartphone You would trust me and ask me for help If I was your smartphone You would rely on and be grateful for me If I was your smartphone You would be excited when I sought your attention If I was your smartphone You would make sure my battery was charged If I was your smartphone You would play games with me and think I was fun If I was your smartphone You would whisper into my ear and share your secrets If I was your smartphone Imagine all the wonderful times we would share If only I was your smartphone

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Date: 4/18/2024 2:34:00 AM
Very clever. Well written too.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 4/18/2024 8:03:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/13/2024 4:50:00 AM
Nice, neat poem, perfect poignancy.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 4/14/2024 12:26:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 4/12/2024 4:17:00 PM
Absolutely true, sad, undisputable, and amazing... If only we would realize this and embrace it....
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 4/14/2024 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Woody!!
Date: 3/29/2024 11:07:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Thanks for your feedback on my poems
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 4/14/2024 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Diane!!
Date: 3/22/2024 9:49:00 AM
A masterpiece!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/22/2024 10:08:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/17/2024 1:06:00 PM
Awesome write
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/18/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 3/10/2024 12:40:00 PM
An old man like me would have never come up with a poem like this. But, it does prove that love and heartache never change - just the technology. This is outstanding writing… and obviously, a sign of the times
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/10/2024 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Mark!!
Date: 3/8/2024 11:06:00 PM
Dear robert, i can feel the touch of wittiness flowing throughout your write so well woven. I think this might be the very first poem iv seen written for “ if i were your smartphone “ in a romantic manner. Clever and innovative. And very well delivered too. I live literally too on my phone so .. hah! This is brilliant. Loved this.
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/9/2024 9:41:00 AM
Very generous, thank you Empress!
Date: 3/8/2024 10:08:00 PM
Original and witty ! Love this!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/9/2024 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Karen!
Date: 3/2/2024 3:10:00 PM
Cute personification Bob. Would you be Apple or Samsung?
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 3/4/2024 9:36:00 AM
I think that as long as I had all the bells and whistles it probably wouldn’t matter ;-)
Date: 2/28/2024 5:23:00 PM
a unique and clever love poem, Robert. Never seen one quite like this one. I especially liked "You would whisper into my ear and share your secrets If I was your smartphone." Have to fave this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/29/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 2/28/2024 12:12:00 PM
Now this is one of the most clever romantic poems I have read... nicely done and very clever dear Robert... If I was a smartphone, by girl would never put me down,.... she is always on it... even when she has a headache!
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/28/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 2/27/2024 1:19:00 PM
wow, I LOVE the creativity here. If only we treated our loved ones like we did our smart phones. a FAVE
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Robert Sidwell
Date: 2/28/2024 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate it.

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