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If I Were Your Love

If I were your love, who deeply cared for you, I would wipe the tears of anguish from your eyes, And I would plant poignant kisses on your cheeks, Telling you, you are my beloved I recognize! Gone through sufferings for many long dreary years, From abject loneliness, severe heartache and pain, I am the only one who can truly fathom your plight, I am the one who would make you exultant again ! You deserved to be treated with kindness and respect, Someone cruel unjustly denied you your right, I would be your true friend, your devoted company, Your confidant, no more alone you need to fight. If I were your love, we would find pure happiness In each other's passionate arms, we trust each other, All the cruelties in the world - will be defeated To true fervent romantic love, that's no wonder! May 1, 2023 "If I Were Your Love" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose FIRST PLACE

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Date: 5/4/2023 9:28:00 PM
Deep emotional poem Mala. Congrats for yuor win.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/12/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Dear Jay. Truly appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 5/4/2023 8:19:00 AM
Deeply emotive--a poem from the heart, Mala. Much enjoyed. BIG congrats on your top win.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/4/2023 6:07:00 PM
Dear Vijay, your visit and comment are so precious! Really appreciate.
Date: 5/3/2023 4:11:00 PM
Dear Mala, Such a sweet and loving poem. All are lovely, but I love your first stanza best--"I would wipe the tears of anguish from your eyes..." is so caring. Congratulations on First Place!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/4/2023 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Dear Ann. I am so glad that you mentioned the stanza you liked.
Date: 5/3/2023 7:07:00 AM
A soulful and sensuous write Mala. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/4/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Really appreciate your beautiful comment.
Date: 5/3/2023 12:21:00 AM
Very beautiful love, Mala, congratulations:)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/4/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. Really appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 5/2/2023 4:36:00 PM
You speak words of true love that can only be known by those that love truly, Mala. Great entry for the contest! Who could deny such love? Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/2/2023 4:48:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. I feel over the moon when getting such comments. So fortunate to be included in a community of wonderful poets and kind friends. Truly appreciate your loveliest comment. BW ~ Mala
Date: 5/1/2023 5:16:00 PM
WoW! Mala You have penned a moving and heartfelt declaration of love. I was moved reading your well written write. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/1/2023 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. It's really sweet of you to comment so beautifully. Love and hugs, Dear Friend. We inspire each other. ~ Mala

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